Coretta
Lyons stared at herself in the mirror. The same way she had been staring at
herself for the past half-hour.
She was a
pretty girl. Of that, there was no doubt in her mind. Still, though, she was a teenage girl, and tonight was a very
important evening. She was going on a date with a guy that she liked very
much—she couldn't even truly admit how much she liked him—and under the
excitement and pride lay insecurity.
"Does
he like my hair up?" she
wondered aloud. "Or down?"
Her cell
phone rang, and interrupted her train of thought. It was her date. Of course.
" Hey
there, Étienne," she said casually. Stay
calm. "I'm almost ready. … you're still coming, right?"
"Of course I am. Been looking forward to it all week."
"You have? That's great, me too!" That was not calm! "… I'll see you soon, then!"
"You
too," the voice on the other end said with a chuckle.
"… way
to go, doofus," she sighed as she hung up. "Make him think you've never been out
with anyone.” With another sigh, she went into the bathroom, where the curling iron waited.
Forty-five minutes later, she was sitting very
calmly in her reading chair. At least, she would have been calm, if she hadn't
kept fidgeting out of sheer nervousness. The dress felt funny, and her nylons
itched, and she wasn't so sure that pinning half her hair up was such a good idea
after all. But it was too late to change it now. She could see the black SUV outside.
Still, she remained sitting. She could already hear her mother voice, sternly reminding her that a lady didn't run out of the door, and a gentleman always came inside first. So she waited patiently, more or less, until she heard the doorbell ring.
There was the sound of conversation and a "Wait right here," before her mother came upstairs to call her down. "Now remember, I want you home by 9 p.m. sharp," Mrs. Lyons said firmly, and Coretta nodded. "And you walk down those stairs, mind you. Act like a young lady, I don't care how excited you are."
Étienne was
waiting at the bottom of the stairs, holding flowers. But Coretta didn't see
them. She was too busy staring.
"Oh my god! …. where's your hair?"
"Wha—?
… oh, right. I cut it, mom's orders. What do you think?"
Mom's orders ... boy, did she know all about those!
Mom's orders ... boy, did she know all about those!
"You
look amazing," she breathed out.
All dignity gone, just like that.
"Well,
I guess I look good. But you look fabulous." He shyly offered her
purple daisies, which she took with delight. "Oh, thank you! I'll just put these in a vase—"
"Oh,
for pity's sake, you two! Don't you have a date to be on? … give me those
flowers and get going!" And Mrs. Lyons shooed them out of the door. Étienne held it open for Coretta to leave first before following slowly
behind. Mrs. Lyons confirmed this for herself by glaring out of the window at their backs until the truck pulled out of sight.
Their
reservation at the Bistro was acknowledged by the gray-haired maitre'd. But,
the older woman informed them, the restaurant was full, and being teenagers,
they could not eat at the bar. "I hope outside is to your liking?"
"Sure,"
Étienne shrugged, and went back outside to tell Coretta the new arrangement.
To make
amends, the senior hostess promised that their food would come out quickly.
Étienne accepted this with good grace, as did Coretta. They sat with their
glasses of iced tea and tried to bridge the unexpected silence.
"This
… this dress," Coretta finally began hesitantly. "I … bought
it a year ago. It's been in my closet in the plastic wrapping, never worn,
never touched. Never really even looked at. It cost more than I made all
summer, delivering papers. When Mom told me that she couldn't afford to pay for
me to go to prom, I almost threw it in the trash."
"Why would you throw away something that took you all summer to earn?"
"… pride," Coretta said frankly. "If I couldn't wear it to prom, I didn't want to wear it at all."
Another
silence.
"What
changed your mind?"
"… you
asked me out," she said, and went pink despite her best efforts.
The food
arrived in under fifteen minutes, sparing either of them from further
confessions.
They ate their dinners quietly. Coretta shared bites of
her lobster tail with her date and smiled sweetly at him. Étienne, for his
part, was too shy to meet her eyes anymore, and stared deep into his seafood
spaghetti.
The meal
finished, they lingered at the table until Étienne stood and offered Coretta
his hand. He led her to a nearby park bench, where they sat, shuffling awkwardly. Coretta brushed imaginary lint from her stockings, and Étienne cleared his throat repeatedly without actually speaking.
"Did
you want to say something?" Coretta suddenly asked, turning to him, and
leaning against his arm before he could move it.
"Ah …
I did … I mean, I … well, I didn't want to … say … something …"
Despite
everything, Coretta giggled. She couldn't help it. He was so ridiculously cute
when he blushed all over.
"… so
… do it," she whispered, and leaned over just a little more.
But before
anything at all could happen, a wriggling gray ball leapt into Coretta's lap,
and the moment was spoiled. For Étienne, at least. Coretta didn't seem to mind
in the least.
With a
small sigh, he checked his watch. 8:48 p.m. He needed to get her back her home
anyway, or there wouldn't be any other dates and other opportunities to kiss. That thought kept him from feeling too disappointed.
He brought
her home right on time and only stayed long enough for a quick squeeze.
Then he was on his way home, and Coretta was smiling foolishly at her mother,
who had appeared from nowhere to pester her about the date and whether that
Shin Yi boy was too forward.
"Of
course he wasn't!" Coretta protested, giggling. "He was an absolute
gentleman all night long. Why, I think I'm going to marry him!"
~*~*~*~*~*~
At home,
Étienne stared at his homework, totally unable to concentrate. He was
certain that he liked Coretta Lyons. And he was certain that Coretta Lyons
liked him.
They would
be done with school in less than three months.
For the
first time in years, he looked around at his home, and felt distinctly
dissatisfied. They had been living in a half-finished house for his entire
childhood. But things were going to change once he became an adult.
"Oh
yeah they are," he muttered quietly, and went back to solving math
problems.
Good for Etienne that he wants to change everything is his house! *chucle* I think all teenagers have that firm plan.... it only takes a long time before they can do so! But there's nothing wrong with dreaming...
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, April... for this update!
True, lol! But Étienne is more than just a dreamer, he's a pretty practical guy. He might even succeed ... if his family doesn't stand in his way! :D
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